PLAGIARISM

    Based on my opinion, I considered student revision 1 as a clear sign of plagiarism. Most of the words that is being used are copied from the two sources. For him/her to avoid the plagiarism, he/she must re-write the text in to his own terms, in his/her on way, but if he/she really wants to copy from the source, then he/she should cite his.her sources.

   On the other hand, I think that the student revision 2 is not plagiarized because of the fact that the student had cited the name of the author in every first part of his/her paragraph. The student acknowledge his/ her sources that's why I considered it as not plagiarized.
   
   
    I really don't know the rules of plagiarism. All i know is that , if you copy and paste the work of other and won't acknowledge them as the real author, it is considered as plagiarism. But if you put the name of the author, the title of the book, and when it is published, even though you copy and paste it, then you will not be charged for plagiarism.

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